By-Stander Comments

Hey i loved this poem. it was really great! so much emotion, You really know how to write! great! ! I love it. P.s thanks for the poem comment.

liked this alot steffi, physical strength is not always strongest, rhythm was beautiful and the view from the bystanders eyes is something i think everyone should think about, maybe it would change how we refuse to notice life when it lies exposed.8.79 out of 10, ben