Tuesday, June 6, 2017

By My Lonesome Comments

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All my life
I have been different
A freak
A weirdo
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Jefferson Carter 06 June 2017

Josefina, I like this though it does smack of self-pity, not the most attractive of emotions. Your line breaks and stanzas and plain diction work well. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know how you like it. Yrs, JC

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