Josefina, I like this though it does smack of self-pity, not the most attractive of emotions. Your line breaks and stanzas and plain diction work well.
If you'd like, check out my new website:
jeffersoncarterverse.com
Let me know how you like it. Yrs, JC
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Josefina, I like this though it does smack of self-pity, not the most attractive of emotions. Your line breaks and stanzas and plain diction work well. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know how you like it. Yrs, JC