Tuesday, June 9, 2009

By Love Possessed. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Deep and lonely, darkness engulfed me,
Crouched over my fragile mind, no caring
Ever pacified salty, shed tears.
Despair remained always unmoved.
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Herbert Nehrlich2 13 June 2009

Gorgeous doesn't quite make it here. This shows the mastery of poetry in its many 'diversities' by a poet who never has mentioned the technical aspects of writing yet is in complete control of them. Effortlessly it seems. Fay, you never disappoint. Hxx

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this, fay, is gorgeous! ! ! ! !

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 10 June 2009

Well I think every true lover understands this feeling, beautiful write as always... Andy 10

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T McH 09 June 2009

I adore your last stanza in particular and relate completely. t x

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A pretty poem possessed of deep feelings and thoughts.10.

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Joseph Poewhit 09 June 2009

Hold ones heart is very deep

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