Monday, May 5, 2008

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Rating: 4.5

So lucky to recieve cause
for recognition and applause.
I couldn't budge from my seat.
The competition was hard to beat.
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Julie Neises
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Scarlett Treat 24 November 2008

I agree with Stone here...the build-up, the nerves, the anticipation...and that final letdown! Well handled!

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Austin Zaratzian 12 May 2008

This is a great poem, with its rhyme scheme and visuals.

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Stone Granite 05 May 2008

Wonderful in its sadness. From shear nervousness to utter defeat was executed quite nicely. I feel the feeling and see the disappointment. Great poem. Stone

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