Thursday, January 31, 2008

By Chance... Comments

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By chance our starlight
Fell on the same darkness,
Awoke a senseless blight
From which a well did spring
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Janri Gogeshvili 02 March 2008

It is rhythmical and with sense … Nice...

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Mary Gordley 31 January 2008

The opening two lines are terrific 'By chance our Starlight/ fell on the same darkness' You won we over right there and followed through to the last line. Great write. Thanks.

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