Saturday, August 9, 2008

By Candle Light Comments

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By candle light we wait, for the meaning of her gun to make sense,
For the pictures in her head to publish.
Forgive me lord, I have sinned.
And this time the pieces don’t fit together,
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Livi Topley
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Neil Marsden 15 October 2008

A very intense piece of poetry written with a great sense of control and pace. - Wonderfu! Neil M.

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