By Being You. Comments

Ammmmmmazing composition........10

Lisa, for some reason the vote meter disappeared the first time I read this, so I came back and gave it the 10 it deserves. David

Lisa, the rhythm and rhyme is so perfect is dances along as you read this. Just beautiful. I loved it from the first word through to the last. Romance is not dead in this piece, but alive and kicking. Great write. Top Marks if I could give it. Thanks for sharing it. David

Lisa, after reading both versions, I've concluded it's an awesome poem regardless of how it's written! Brian

i think its interesting how u chose 2 write this poemm.. usually u would would right a couplet.. or one of them a-b-a.. or sumthing like that but u decided 2 mix it up.. at first i thought it wasnt going 2 rhyme.. or atleast not that much.. ................................................................................................................... You trust me inevitably and I trust you in return You take me for the person I am and learn the things I learn You love me with all that you have You give me with all that you give But most of all my darling You make me want to live .......................................................................................................................' i had 2 pause right there.. bcuz i luved that part of the poem.. the best part i have 2 say! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! going bak.. u switched it up and thats kool.. and i liked it keep writing: -) debbie

beautiful poem! and thanks again for the comment on mine. this poem reminds me of an awesome freind that i have. my feelings exactly, i give it a well deserved 10! love starr