By Behavior Comments

Nice poem! Facts....well described! Padmavathi, Secunderabad May 15,2014

Re: By behavior (Score: 1) by b.b.w.(Tulsa) on Wednesday, May 14,2014 (22: 07: 53) I enjoyed your poem. It's good to keep in mind that there are true rhymes and half (or inexact) rhymes. Also, rhyme schemes can be irregular. Experienced poets sometimes alternate true rhymes and half rhymes and use irregularity for effect. To call this schizo shows ignorance of poetic devices. Keep up the good work. Reply to This | Parent | Delete Re: By behavior (Score: 1) by jadia4708au on Thursday, May 15,2014 (07: 49: 10) so encouraging words sir. Poets need to reform n say what his soul really wants to convey instead of keeping confined to rhymes or no rhymes.

Nice poem with a pertinent message. Thaanks for sharing, Hasmukhji. Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India May 15,2014

Re: By behavior (Score: 1) by zbird on Wednesday, May 14,2014 (18: 56: 23) the rhyming scheme keeps getting lost..it rhymes and then it doesn't and then it does and then it doesn't... a bit schizo... choose one style and stick to it for each poem Reply to This | Parent | Delete Re: By behavior (Score: 1) by jadia4708au on Wednesday, May 14,2014 (21: 26: 53) it is unique style.12,34. enjoy poetry. welcome n thanks

Post Lovely work Olwen Cuttita9 hours ago Well done. Many take amiss of what really matters and focus on only the little things that don't really compare or stand up to other matters. This is said and written very well. Comment +1

What can be real face? Is that what we try to find out in case?