Thursday, May 7, 2009

By All Means Comments

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If there was a willing way out
by all means i seek it
i dig deep into it
hoping to find what was scattered behind
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Eli Unknown
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Bright Rose 24 May 2009

wow, I almost cried, again brillaint, deep and evocative, well penned and well done :)

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Paul Hansford 10 May 2009

The irregular rhymes here keep the poem moving along, rather than just being an outpouring of emotion. The ending is very sad.

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