Buzzing Around Begonia! Man Meets Doom Here! Comments

'Professionalism is in hay, humanity is at bay and on reel, Where is the zest? Where is the zeal? Where is promptness? Where is the feel? In the world of plastic smile, Where is human appeal? ' You are to amazing my frined, splendid captivating piece, riddled with imagery. This is an insanly well written piece!

I can kick my own behind for not reading this before... This is my kind of poetry! Harry, a pat on your shoulder, for writing this brilliant poem!

Wow, wow, a great poem, really a great poem! ! ! ! You are a great writer and a poet, , , noble and a fantastic man you are.. [Earth is the man's craddle, yet unable to handle Tut! He has to leave his craddle in a birdle/the naked-truth of life/ ((good rhythm and an internal rhyme with a fine imagination)) ] Humankind remembers! A myth is human touch, Man is a myth now(so philosophical line) Time is a healer, time is a dealer, oh my mate So, surrender thyself to nature, hey! trivial being(that trivial things-body, mind and soul) [what an amazing rhyme scheme in these lines, (superb internal and end rhyme) I salute you great poet! ! ! ] Otherwise, prepares to end of ye, a minute creature(this's a challenging line) Oh, dear poet, , Really you're a talented and a brainiac! ! ! ! 10+10+10+10+10+10+10+10+10+10+ For this great poem! ! ! ! !

'Bombilating like fleas, bombinating like bees; Philandering like donkeys, fiddling like monkeys! Buzzing around begonia in pensive moods, Huffing and puffing along ruminative roads..' I can see here a royal, regal and blue-blooded display of words. Yet contrastingly, we can see here how a poet can use his satire to mock at the present day society. Mean is powerful yet the usage of language is comical. So I can coin a term for the poet a comical satire! A big treat to you - hey poet take it!

No technology has ever solved sorrows.They are only to devastate and champion the cause of group theory of survival of the fittest.Well written thoughts based on these ideas.Metaphors and similes are just wonderful.