Tuesday, August 4, 2009

Buzzer Comments

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sometimes i wish my brain was a buzzer
and when the bleakness penetrates it,
there would be a massive noise piercing
directly through my ear hole,
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chloe young
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Subroto Chatterjee 15 August 2009

An interesting stimulus-response Pavlovian set-up....All one has to do is press the right button....Buzzzzzzzzz.....! ! ! ! Cheers. Subroto

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Shashendra Amalshan 11 August 2009

well this is a different one indeed, I mean modern, young poets do express themselves through all sorts of poetic techniques.. good.... cheers shan

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you got a different mind, good.

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could create a seizure of happiness and i could glow. rife with bitterness...

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