Saturday, September 17, 2005

Buying A Ticket Comments

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And it just hit me, then and there.
I was, with saved-up cash today
buying the ticket to escape from there.
While counting she looked up
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 17 September 2005

Nicely written! ! :)

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Savannah Churchill 17 September 2005

Oh god what drivel, you have no soul Herbie darling, no soul at all

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Theorem Thetruthserum 17 September 2005

'and flashed a smile to melt titanium'...great line for a great poem.

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