Cars on a road.
Each of us
hugging the pavement
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Real nice work, find your own way in life rather than following the expected routes I like this concept and I enjoyed this poem thanks Nik
It's an interesting piece, though cars do have their place. Without mine I wouldn't be able to function! I do get your point, however! HG: -) xx
love the poem. the distractions part specifically. otherwise you're just wasting gas! haha just kidding. as much as i dislike the car the poem evens out my feelings. it was a good read though. thanks bud.
Yeah, do something different, break away from the crowd, dare to stand out, get away and 'let go'...very well composed - great sentiment in this poem j.