Monday, April 14, 2008

Buy An Xterra Comments

Rating: 4.8

Cars on a road.

Each of us
hugging the pavement
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David DeSantis
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R H 17 April 2008

Yeah, do something different, break away from the crowd, dare to stand out, get away and 'let go'...very well composed - great sentiment in this poem j.

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LOVEFOOL Aka 15 April 2008

Real nice work, find your own way in life rather than following the expected routes I like this concept and I enjoyed this poem thanks Nik

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Original Unknown Girl 15 April 2008

It's an interesting piece, though cars do have their place. Without mine I wouldn't be able to function! I do get your point, however! HG: -) xx

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Michael Campbell 15 April 2008

love the poem. the distractions part specifically. otherwise you're just wasting gas! haha just kidding. as much as i dislike the car the poem evens out my feelings. it was a good read though. thanks bud.

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Triin Kann 14 April 2008

I'm just wondering how do you do that...

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David DeSantis

David DeSantis

Utica, NY
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