Monday, June 20, 2011

Buttons Are So Gay Comments

Rating: 4.8

Everyone has an opinion
Consider your opinions like the buttons on your shirt
Each button representing an opinion you have in life
All buttoned, you are clothed in full knowledge of your view on world and life
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Stefanie Fontker 15 August 2011

Society is definitely flawed. A beautiful write though, your mind digs deep.

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Lisa John 27 June 2011

This is quite a GAY poem but its really facinating the topic is unique and of an equired taste... Great x

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Kseniya (Xeny) Rundel 25 June 2011

Since you 'consider the curious case of the standout kid', the whole poem goes the gay way. And your 'manifest of the idea with the existing social systems', that is perfectly described in the comment of Pranab k Chakraborty below is less heard. I'd take another case and shorten the poem. Let's imagine for a minute, that people you are writing to are also clever and a bit educated))) English is not my native language. But your native english was clear and nice reading for me. That's really good i think because your english is a language of international communication. I'd read your poems on another topics with pleasure... Sincerely! ! ! ! !

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Pranab K Chakraborty 22 June 2011

Poet has tried to manifest an idea with the existing social systems... its origin, its limitation, its extension, its probability with the light of philosophical truth and fallacy. After all a great work like a thesis he has done with the economy of sound. Lucid and clear to all the reader who has got the patience to read the whole. In science we know...it runs with the tracks of observation, interpretation, manipulation and inference. We also know... philosophy derives from the common sense....So, what looks impossible to grant today, perhaps tomorrow we may have to solve another problem and this one will lost its importance to discuss. Todays problem will be no more for tomorrows......Theory of relativity is much more effective to apply such cases. Social truths varry from society to society, geographicl situations and also on time perhaps....You have written all these things here as I understand. Thank you for sharing. Regards, pranab 10+ (if it goes)

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Amy Lalala 20 June 2011

I loved it! How you thought to use buttons like that amazes me! good job!

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Anita Cross 20 June 2011

wow that may have been a long poem as im sure it took some time to write but it was strong well written and deeply meaning ful as well as moving and it got me thinking your right mayb society does have issues... thank you

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