Butterfly Comments

excellent, wandering with you midst the harmony and disharmony of nature, musical and sonorous tones that would join with Frost

Felt I was right there with you, thanks to the imagery and detail and I chose to stay with you. Nature is full of wonder - worth the wandering. I like the fact that you used a book as a source. I like to do that.

I enjoyed this write. In every time there is a season. Some seasons bring not so good and others more beauty.....I liked your ending. Take care.

I like the language in this poem and the theme of a delicate transformation hence the title 'Butterfly', which I love in irony to fact that the language in this poem is so heavy. Beautiful =D ~x~Sarah~x~

Slendid rite Sir! I can only assume such beauty yet you have painted the perfect picture......

Splendid! Kelly your butterfly took me a long journey and I am not tired. What a lovely creature.They are very lucky as in their world no wars.

very well written with great flow of words and excellent images. cecil

My favorite passage in this poem is: Along those swollen banks we stroll, To take account of winter’s toll - Eviscerated, but his ghostly grip still lingers In the frost that splits the soil. What marvellous description! It reminds me of Ted Hughes, and I mean that as a sincere compliment! Overall though, a poem of regeneration and hope.

'little nests defying carnage' - Wonderful imagery! How seemingly insignificant, yet how strong they are in the face of a determined season's tempest.

Very nice Kelly. I am in awe.

Wonderful. Thank you.