Thursday, August 2, 2007

Butterfly Wish Comments

Rating: 4.4

Vulnerable, soft and fragile
Delicate to the touch
Dodging, ducking, evading
Every attempt to clutch
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Jack Prost
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Adeline Foster 05 April 2012

I don't know about inecent, but I did catch that double intent in the last line. A very good poem having all the requisites of enjoyment. Read mine - Frustrated Plans - Adeline

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Jennifer K 05 July 2010

Curious and hopeful. It was a great read. =]

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Zachary Clark 22 February 2009

I love this poem nice and inecent.

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