Tuesday, January 20, 2009

Butterfly Was My Guest Comments

Rating: 4.8

A butterfly flew to my window pane
Beautifully black spotted and big
I could see it through the glass
It was not aware of my presence
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Sasivellat Menon
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Kee Thampi 04 December 2018

very good to learn and read kee

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Sasidharan Vellat Menon 04 December 2018

appreciate your time

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Kee Thampi 09 October 2018

Charmed by it's beautifully Spread and decorated wings God must have sent it to me Like an angel from the heaven

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Sasidharan Vellat Menon 10 February 2018

Thanks friends for all the insprational comnents. I feel really overwhelmed.

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 June 2017

Into the vast chest of nature Blessed and Beautiful are they Though their lives are short charm, beauty, creation, loveliness, flying.... at the window...... suddenly it left giving you a sense of loss........ thank you.. a beautiful poem. dear poet. tony

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Mallika Achuthan Menon 02 October 2014

A splendid poem...Indeed I like it.

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Vladishav Romashev 19 December 2012

Beautiful poem... It's close to me.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 29 December 2009

god gives us such beautiful visions to take us of this petty life and put us into the mainstream...i suppose...a picture poem

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~ Jon London ~ 27 February 2009

Fragile wings fly your words of a beautiful moment of natures blessings

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Kesav Easwaran 31 January 2009

the poem is akin to a good video shot...good visual image you create here, Sasi...and self soothing words to end your write...good...10

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Indira Babbellapati 26 January 2009

liked it...once it settled on my hand at a traffic signal...i think it's 'butterfly and me' is the poem that emerged...

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Aiswarya. T.anish 24 January 2009

Though, butterflies have short lives, they give us so much joy. Beautiful poem!

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Anjali Sinha 20 January 2009

wow a larva then a moth and finally a butterfly wonder metamorphosis--gods creation nice poem--brought out the excitement nicely about your guest anjali

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Sasivellat Menon

Sasivellat Menon

Tirur, Kerala, India
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