I grow,
I struggle,
I am not nurtured,
Nor cared for,
...
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Beautifully written with well chosen details creating an atmosphere
Aisha, a brilliant example of how change can be a glorious thing. Great poem... very inspiring! ! Brian
I have always been fascinated by butterflies.Their beauty is fragile and may exist only for a day, but what joy they give to the soul while they are living..We are told there is a time for everything. I am glad there is a time for butterflies.Wonderful poem. Warm regards, Sandra
this poem has a lot of meaning! it reminds me of another similar poem 'Example' keep it up Lubna
The metaphor works - no, plays. This poem is both serene and invigorating. Yours is a special gift.
A truly well-described piece. Shows the will to live, and the change into something beautiful at the end. And the freedom..... Love, Fran xx
i found this poem in PH's list of poems with the 'topic' butterfly. i plan to use it in my February 2019 showcase of poems to be found shortly in my list of PH poems. and to MyPoemList. 2006: a long time ago. i hope you have not been picked out of the air by a bird! Thanks. bri (: