Butterfly Of Love Comments

Beautifully composed. Your choice of words in all poems I have read so far, is impeccable!

Every chasm of joyous dream is Like oozing sense of love, a funeral is a time of mourning and grief, yet here it almost seems like an acceptance. If life is illusion love is a dream.

some fu...sorry has taken place by PH INCORRECT COMMENTS

SOME''' FU'' TOOK PLACE MINUS BELOW ONE PG ''Honeyed season of eternal spring, In the youthful Grove of love and joy, The buzzing celebration of funeral Song, Pruning theblow of sadness deep, Death is dead sucking the draught'''' U know I don't like buttering only the gal is a beauty unless there is a hidden mishap

And yes the poem is NOT about life but DEATH REVIEW IT DOESN'T SEEM to suit the butterfly u show POET PG

polotickcs is trix money business and sexism all are like fair as is love and war in war more lives man dies early MINUS THIS(ABOVE PIECE) THE POEM IS AS BEAUTIFUL AS IS UR MISS Think of BLISS ' I am bad still I am smiling death is known finality why worry PEEEE GEEEEEEE

Beautifully written funeral song

The buzzing celebration of the Funeral Song: to have this amidst Eternal Spring is very powerful