Monday, July 31, 2006

Butterfly Moon Comments

Rating: 3.1

Butterfly moon of a flightless dawn.
Marching softly with a rhythm gone.
Angels coming in a darkened morn.
Demons ascending in a vertical form.
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A.J. McKinley
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Ben Gieske 27 April 2008

I like the rhythm and rhyme of this poem. It invites one to read it again. I like the last line the best of all. A beautiful image.

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Nyrical Poet 19 March 2007

Wow! ! Excellent piece of writing! ! Thanks for sharing! ! ~always, Nick

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A.J. McKinley

A.J. McKinley

Indiana, United States
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