Wednesday, October 28, 2015

Butterfly Kisses Comments

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I flutter my eyelashes softly against his cheek
Laughing, he pulls back and asks, 'What is that? '
'Butterfly kisses, ' I respond, smiling coyly
He laughs again and tilts his head up towards the sunlight,
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Cherie Mort
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Dev Anand 10 April 2016

I flutter my eyelashes softly against his cheek Laughing, he pulls back and asks, 'What is that? ' 'Butterfly kisses, ' I respond, smiling coyly. beautiful love expressions..... dev. love ur poems.

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The memories of lost love is here creatively composed!

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Kim Barney 02 January 2016

I love the poem and I love the graphic. It would go well with my poem BUTTERFLY OF DEATH.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 December 2015

Romance, stress, breaking up, pain and sufferings that goes with it shattering lovely dreams of a love. beautifully presented in this poem. liked this poem very much. thank you. Tony

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Chinedu Dike 03 November 2015

Lovely depiction of romance followed by distress and animosity in the bliss of love. Love is a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly. It's also whimsical and temperamental, appearing unannounced and may leave without warning if not carefully nurtured to maintain its bliss. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing Cherie. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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