Friday, June 22, 2018

Butterfly In Rose Garden Comments

Rating: 5.0

Captivated by the charm
She flew towards the fragrance
On the dewy misty day
When she embraced the petals
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Rini Shibu
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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 August 2022

A beautiful poem. Loved it.

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Narayana Aghalaya 09 October 2018

there is no such thing as free lunch. A price has to be paid. Brought out beautifully in this poem!

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 July 2018

Hi Rini, It is true. She was blind in your love But your thorns pricked her to bleed “ But rose without thorns is spring without fragrance......

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 June 2018

you asked who is this man ]]]]? ? ? ROSE WITHOUT THORNS FRAGRANCE TO THE CORE AND to none does he belong except the faithful they have themselves to prove can you

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 June 2018

Oh red roses what have you done She was blind in your love But your thorns pricked her to bleed......touching expression with nice theme. A brilliant poem on butterfly nicely executed. Enjoyed with attractive photo provided. Thank u dear Rini.

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Lamar Cole 23 June 2018

Great poem about butterfly in rose garden.

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Kostas Lagos 22 June 2018

An astonishing poem, Rini.It is just brilliant!

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Bill Cantrell 22 June 2018

On bassant the butterfly flies over Arab sands, though misty days are rare...the butterfly in there, a good one!

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