Saturday, October 3, 2009

' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' Butterfly Goes To School(Haiku Sequence) Comments

Rating: 3.0

Butterfly in class
learns lessons along with kids.
Excellent student.
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Kim Barney 29 March 2015

Butterflies really can do amazing things. You should read my poem BUTTERFLY OF DEATH. By the way, I enjoyed your poem very much.

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Amitava Sur 24 March 2015

An amazing imagery with butterflies going to school, very interesting aspect.

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Akhtar Jawad 28 September 2014

A beautiful description of a colorful butterfly enjoying her firs experience of school. A nicely painted picture.

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* Sunprincess * 26 June 2014

................wonder if the butterfly enjoyed school....beautiful poem...

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Captain Herbert Poetry 28 April 2014

....interesting write, Unique and Nice. Thumbs up Pls do comment on my poems

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Kelsi Brockway 21 March 2012

I absoultley adore this poem and i am so glad that you explained it afterwards because it just makes it all the more beautiful! A total TEN!

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Patrick A. Martin 10 October 2009

I'm glad you explained the story behind your writing this- on the other hand I wish you hadn't - but either way I enjoed these haiku. 10

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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