Butterfly: Fortune Hunter Comments

Kafil this is good poetry

Really nice descriptions and an unusual slant - really good!

The little wings, Bearing the colors, Moving around the flower, Charming her, it is after butterflies and with colourful apperance attract us reminding of lovely nature....10 read mine...butterflies around....colour

nice little poem with a clear message.... yes all butterflies are not as harmless as one might believe chrming similtude cheers

a beautiful poem good and interesting

I love this visual metaphor: ''The little wings, Bearing the colors, Moving around the flower, Charming her, '' imagine a surrealist picture with butterflies and flowers...what can be most beautiful...10+

WOW! symbolic the little butterfly fortune hunter! ! 10+

The butterfly seeks the flower's love, which is the fortune he hunts. Beautiful piece.

'But he is the fortune hunter, The little butterfly...' Yes, fortune hunter, truly expressed.10+++