Wednesday, April 30, 2008

Butterfly Flutterby Comments

Rating: 3.9

The butterfly was young
Her vibrant wings of delicate lace
Such grace such poise
A hcarming butterfly
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Bella Ravenstar
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Hadley Shark 07 September 2009

Hi bella! I thought this poem was amazing and I can't wait to hear moregreat poems from you! Keep them coming!

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Jessica Wood 18 August 2009

Hello Bella ur poem that u wrote was amazing the way your words flowed 2geather was amazin i have a question 4 u am 17 years old how is it that when u describe it feels as if i can see it all i cant seem 2 describe the way i see or feel things it doesnt seem the same if u can please write me back i would in joy that

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Risha : Ahmed 21 July 2008

This certainly deserve a 10. Need I say anything more.

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Bella Ravenstar

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