Butterfly Dreams Comments

...I glide by your beautiful smile.... exceedingly beautiful

To land upon your shoulder and watch you breathe Oh to hear your voice sweetly recite as you versed with magic tones I would fly within your view great imagination and feelings. tony

And from your sweet, sweet lips you would say, Beautiful butterfly how I wish this night you were real So I could hold you in my arms and love you always..........then i shall appear as a human being....... how lovely these thoughts are......... so imaginative... how we all wish that...... thank you dear poetess. tony

What a absolutely wonderful poem, elegant and smooth with an innocent beauty.....this is poetry at its very best! !

I just love the theme of a butterfly. Butterflies are just so spiritual. And your poem is enchanting and I can feel your spirit soar through the whole of this beautiful work.....Karin Anderson

Tremendous sweet reflection! Great imagery! .........10+

A beautiful imaginative piece of write. I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem.

Beautiful picture you have painted in words here Patricia your heart is speaking in this one, great work

I LOVE IT! This is a beautiful poem. You are very creative.

Nice. Best I can do is be a Butters! Be careful what you wish for though...!

The shape of the stanzas reminds me of butterfly wings. Very stunning, and colorful.

I see you are a fan of the butterfly? I too have used the butterfly in some of my poems....kudos to your work.

Such a romantic wish. May you be the Monarch that perches in his rose garden and may he enjoy every sight of you there.

Romanticism breathes deeply in your romantic voice. What a dizzy and wonderful ride!

Wonderful verse full of mystical feelings of love entwined, Love duncan X

its really good...i like it alot! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ~stary night~

Great things from little things form... the butterfly holds such a small part of life but can bring the greatest of joy... to be both human and butterfly would be a true evolution... Alison

Such vivid dipiction....th' imagery says it all... F.J.R.

Patricia, a wonderful piece of writing! I am a huge fan of your work! ! Always, Nick