Butterfly Dream Haiku Comments

winter dawn a butterfly wakes up in my dream waking and flying butterfly of your dreams so imaginative and poetic dear poet. tony

first lovely night... softest one see my silhouette I can also see daily at night under shades of moon bright see me tonight happy you will be coldest wintry snowy dawning my sleepy earth fly rises as I fall wet and scream now a broken creamy dream

Lovely and simply creative. Great write dear poet

WHY DON'T U THANK UR READERS O GREAT HAIKUIST A GREAT HUMAN QUALITY MISSING ON PH MOSTLY HENCE '''sometimes flow of appreciation also inspires the new to ignite fighting spirit. PH could accept that challenge also..... to hold, to increase their self-assurance.'''' A GOOD COMMENT BEING SHARED HERE PLEASE READ THOSE WHO READ URS AND COMMENT ON THEIRS TOO

Fine haiku dear poet.......thanks a lot

Butterfly's round of transmigration breaks the chrysalis of a dream

With the dawn of a cool setting, one gets in to a colorful world, in a dream though. Wow! Beautifully crafted with tremendous profundity. How you choose and manage words, it's amazing. Full marks Liu. Thanks for sharing

A nice dream, nice haiku.10

in winter butterflies dont fly.. in ur dream it flies. so nice an imagination. tha nk you. tony

A splendid haiku filled with great imagery. enchanting

A Haiku with the wings of a butterfly,

So pretty! I've been trying so hard to understand true haiku because all I learned when I was younger was that it was 5 syllables,7 syllables,5 syllables. But a few months ago I learned that that wasn't the case, and this seems like an excellent example of true haiku. Thank you for sharing! Hopefully I will be able to write them now, because this form is very appealing to me. I like that it's a form that is so little, but can say so much.

.............very nice a butterfly is like a dream....they are only here for a short time...

a dreamy kind of haiku with butterfly. NICE