Butterfly Dance Comments
She drift's around without luggage, living off a blank page
Without family, finding a time to bloom,
Raising her face to the sun,
As it embraces her desire to have fun,
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An extraordinary depiction of the feminine creative spirit, and a wonderful analogy to the butterfly: for they both evolve through different stages of creation and metamorphosis! The artistic spirit at its summit! A lovely poem!
Such a lovely inner world presented in this beauty filled poem.
A very invigorating write well presented Hazel enjoyed thank you Alan
As she thrives as an artist of deep emotions, Set free in flight as she finds the eternal light, Of the freedom of another day paved in smiles, Along the many country miles, With her choice to rejoice, In every star filled night, With the twinkle in her eyes ever so bright... .. loved these lines. It is highly imaginative and it has been eloquently inscribed the inner sense of wisdom on a philosophical base. I appreciate the penmanship. Thank u dear madam for sharing this poem here.
This is a magnificent ode to the Bohemian lifestyle. Should be required reading for Bohemians the world over! ! !
From pupa to butterfly- -there is a total transformation- - - -achieving the beauty, color and getting the wings to fly- - - the secret code, the eternal light it finds for this metamorphosis. The imagery of butterfly as an expression of creative energy is nicely penned. To quote a few lines - - - - As she thrives as an artist of deep emotions, Set free in flight as she finds the eternal light, Of the freedom of another day paved in smiles, Along the many country miles, With her choice to rejoice, In every star filled night, With the twinkle in her eyes ever so bright.
I love the rhythm and subtle rhymes in this poem of life celebration.... I think it would make a great rap number! Very nicely penned Hazel....Great poem!
This child/woman has found the secret code to be free, Love, a vintage lace swirling around her childlike face, Immersed in nature's verse, A beauty captured and painted with attractive colors..................10
....tis piece is so beautifully composed............cant help commenting on it! ! !
It's a lovely penning. The real freedom lies in the sense of realization and the beauty is with the soul.
enjoyed thoroughly and no soone had done reading missed living that ways, thanks to my life's odds. yet thanks to you for now i feel good hope that i will be able unfold the art of me dancing. I would be glad to turn one like your butterfly.... Thank you. lots of love...to you.
a very beautiful poem, its true our real happiness lies in our inner sense but we don't realize that..an amazing write..
You know where is light when dark is around...your mind! _SOul
Our real happiness lies in our inner sense, but many times we search for happiness outside. Our joy lies within and really it will make us dance with joy. Poem filled with positivity. Beautiful flow of ink from your pen. Loved it.
Each butterfly represents a human mind in ecstasy and let us all take care of it... Hazel, I repeat your short course in poetry has started showing its impact on you here because the ultimate improvement in the rendering style has to be considered. Here I give my / your 10 marks
Beautiful poem full and rich of the beautiful free of a butterfly girl Loved it Thanks for shring BB: O)
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Love, a vintage lace swirling around her childlike face, Immersed in nature's verse, ..// superb, really a great expression