hormonal soup
pulsing, congealing;
chrysalis carapace
throbbing, cracking;
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Superb command of language. This succinct and eloquent poem paints a vivid picture. It is also an aural acievement. Magnificent! S :)
To be honest I usually prefer poems with rhyme rhythm or both but somehow your poem here entertains me where many of its kind do not. It must be the excellent choice of words...
another great one. Brilliant imagery, superb choice of words.
Fascinating. You definately have a way with words. Ten for this. As always, Sandra
I really like this poem. The whole, brilliant metamorphous. Thank you Bill.
Breathtaking, as you imagine that you are the butterfly breaking out and relieved to be free x
Excellent write.Great metaphor! A 10!