Thursday, December 21, 2006

Butterfly, Butterfly Comments

Rating: 3.6

butterfly, butterfly
fly in the sky
butterfly, butterfly
flies so high
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Adryan Bates
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sree lekshmi 19 November 2018

Nice poem

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Hello 29 June 2021

Pagal

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Suraj goyal 30 August 2018

Superrrrb

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Sheeja 12 July 2018

The poem is very gd.Can you give a rhythm too..

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Abhijith 03 July 2018

What a good poem

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Ankush 03 June 2018

Bakwas

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JJ so cool 15 May 2018

This is so beautiful

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Kim Barney 13 February 2015

Loved this poem about the butterfly. I love butterflies. Check out my poem BUTTERFLY OF DEATH.

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Awa Bah 09 April 2014

I think that this poem is lively

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Kate E 15 October 2013

i think this poem shows a lot of emotion considering how simple and short it is. i really like it.

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Sorrows 123 30 January 2013

i think this poem is lovely except for the fly part maybe you should substitute it with FLY with flutter.

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Angel Plant 14 December 2012

beautiful I love butterflies

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Lola 06 December 2012

Very Good. I love it

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Mehmet Turgut 09 March 2012

what a marvellous thing... well done..

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Patricia Carnes 04 October 2011

I like this. Very Good Job

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William Slaughter 15 April 2011

Umm, this is depressing, but a decent poem, Lot of Love'

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Rebecca Bell 31 August 2010

It's so simple yet so sad. I really enjoy it.

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Lum Nothing 25 September 2008

This poem is really sad, but i love it. I think this should be published.

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Tammara Boyce 15 September 2007

nice poem, its short and sweet.tru though.

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Josie Brooks 02 May 2007

its just, amazing. its so great. its lovely.

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Philippe Barbeau 17 April 2007

kinda nice, nice ideas. I'm sure your other poems are even better =P

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