Wednesday, December 21, 2011

Butterfly & Bee Comments

Rating: 5.0

He offered imperfection
And said it was for free
I settled for deception
Knew he wouldn’t see
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Dean Meredith
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Ivor Hogg 24 December 2011

Sometimes things are just ot meant to be

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Dave Walker 21 December 2011

Really like it, a great poem with a beautiful flow. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, For Paul Blackburn, its a true story.

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