Thursday, June 18, 2015

Butterfly And The Bee Comments

Rating: 5.0

Stepped into the ring without a trace of fear
Fists held high as if to say would anyone dare
Bobbed his head up and down then looked around
No greater boxer in the world can ever be found
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Patricia Grantham
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 August 2015

When I read the title and read half way I thought it is a fight between nature's two companions. You kept the mystery going to the end. Beautiful lines. Enjoyed.

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Patricia Grantham

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