Butterfly Comments

i like that you apparently took suggestions from Adeline in editing. :) bri

is adding..K, at the end, just your 'signature'? is it meant to be part of the poem? i'd like a stanza break between these two lines, ...but... i don't get my way always, and it's your poem, AND a good one! with nobody else. But the jokes on them, to MyPoemList. and i plan to use in my February 2019 showcase of poems, soon to be found in my list of PH poems, with topics this month of lonely and butterfly. Thanks. bri (:

wonderful, you make it look so easy. thanks for sharing

Beauty deep within and the courage to unwrap the layers that hide it. Thank you for posting this.

This is a good poem that has much more going for it than just cute. I really liked that last line. May I show you two changes that would help? The first word of the first line should read 'You're' because you really mean 'you are'; also, you may have meant the third line to read, 'As they frolic'. Great poem. Adeline

Transformationof the soul -how heavenly.

i don't know.. but i love darkness with a small circle of light at the end and in your darkness it's an ending of blooming nature with the sun at the end but one day you'll touch the light but your still far in the dark it's amazing

A melodious composition. Nice.

This is really good the ryhmes are nice and i like it

yes I liked it....10

delightful poem...keep on smiling...

Saint, Cute poem. Consider ending it with 'That is how this butterflies' (play on words) Peace, Ray

that was good stuff... keep on keepin' on