Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Butterfly Comments

Rating: 4.0

You’ve been changing
And so have I
We used to be bosom buddies;
Fast friends
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Mariyam Reyshma 29 December 2015

Great idea to chose Butterfly as a theme. Its so nice..

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Adeline Foster 04 December 2015

Indeed a lovely poem, noticed the typo so have set it right. We do metamorphose without notice, causing someone misery. The fly and butterfly: Great idea for a poem. Read mine – Of Dandelions and Tears - Adeline Thanks for your comments.

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Adeline Foster 05 July 2014

Indeed a lovely poem, just right. The fly and butterfly. How cute such a gread idea for a poem. Read mine - Last Rung On Your Ladder - Adeline PS I bask in your comments. Thanks

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Howard Johnson 05 February 2011

A very enjoyable piece, thank you for sharing

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Miroslava Odalovic 13 November 2010

Hey beautiful fly don't flee from your butterfly. :)

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Bert Bell 04 November 2010

This is a very nice, light-hearted and whimsical piece of poetry. Lots of nice images and originality. Very nice indeed.10

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Sidi Mahtrow 03 November 2010

Then with a flick of golden wings He sailed off into the beaconing sky Before I could think of things To be said, in reply. s

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