Monday, October 27, 2008

Butterfly Comments

Rating: 4.7

Feel like a butterfly; mostly
half finished
still clinging to the
umbilical cord of the Palette
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Rehan Hyder
COMMENTS
Kasia Fedyk 24 May 2012

Wow, I am floating on a palettes vibrant colors where a butterfly left behind, I touch it once and I become whole. Superb!

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'Feel like a butterfly' Rachel Ann Butler

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 04 September 2009

is significant your Butterfly.

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sweetttttttttttttttttttttttt

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Marieta Maglas 27 May 2009

A metamorphosis, which is not complete with the color effect in aesthetics of poetry. Here is a wonderful picture in the lyrics.10++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 May 2009

Marvelous Rehan.10+

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Rachel Butler 29 November 2008

Pictorially beautiful in my minds eye Thank you for sharing

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Aijaz Asif 07 November 2008

unth(superb) write, in few words everything is described....i loved it thanks 10++++ for this remarkable write rgds asif

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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 November 2008

This kind of small poems with some flash it them appeal to me most....very good.10

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Anjali Sinha 03 November 2008

small but so cute nice write ++10 anju (do read and comment on mine)

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 29 October 2008

ahhhh..classic rehan...excellent

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 27 October 2008

Ocassional doubt, and the mortal ellement of human insecurity....can result in making us better & stronger, in whatever our deficiencies be....There are a many strings attached to Life. Sometimes all we can do is hold-on tight to faith in God & ourselves...in that order.Great Penning, Rehan! -fjr-

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