Butterfly Poem by Deepti Agarwal

Butterfly

Rating: 4.8


Flying high, being a butterfly
sings aloud in deep forests
let me drink the nector to my full
seems which is made just for me!

When I open my Rainbow wings
smiles, feeling elated
heights of that high sky
its that, Now I want to touch! !

~~5/5/08~~

This is the literal translation of my 'Titali'.. for the ones who cannot understand hindi.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 14 May 2008

Now ths poet makes it with catch the eyes heights of that high sky its that, Now I want to touch! !

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Vaibhav Shah 09 May 2008

A beatiful description of Titali.Really a romantic poem in its nature.It sounds similar feelings when Words worth reacts as he sees Rainbow: My heart leaps up When I behold a rainbow in the sky................good poem

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Vidi Writes 06 May 2008

Lets become butterflies Flutter for a whole day Think those memories forever. At times we will recall The ugly worm turning into beauty Its a lesson to us too To overcome the dirt of our mind Get purified as we grow old. Thanks for this feeling.

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Ted M 22 August 2009

You paint a beautiful picture on your page, just like an artist on canvas. The beautiful butterflies drinking nectar in the wild with the dense forests and flying high in the sky; you painted them all in just a stroke. Nice...........

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*Trusting You* 17 December 2008

there is an amazing image... painters and other poets feed off things such as this. great job. Crystal

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premji premji 03 November 2008

your pain for translation is really worth..

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Koyel Mitra 18 September 2008

This is a beautiful poem with lovely imagery.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 31 July 2008

Butterfly is a symbol of love.......fine poem......10+

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