Butterfly Comments

I love the imagery of a dandelion, butterfly and rainbow. It is simply a lovely poem. 10 Karin Anderson

Lovely indeed! A passionate plea!

very nice what your pen has made

What an absolutely beautiful poem. These few lines say so much in such a lyrical way. Do you know how spiritual butterflies are? I would eventually like my son to make a movie (he is a film maker) of the profound experience our family has had with a butterfly. This poem touched a special spot in my heart... Karin Anderson

Im homeless As wonderer as dandelion Such a Nice imagery Thx for sharing ^_^

Your poems are rich in imagery from Nature. They are deep delved in mysticism of Coleridge with Wordworthian appeal.

It's so beautiful. It's a fantastic dream. The images in this poem makes me see a picture.

i feel the love in your butterfly and rainbow...nice poem

A lovely romantic piece, full of imagery, a ten for this, Best wishes Lynda

You write very beautifully and romantically... Thanks, Tsira

as the butterfly tilts heavenward, it kicks dust up recalling the lost legend

The final five lines stand by themselves and are the making of this lovely poem. I enjoyed it and was invigorated by it.

Wonderfully done...love it. thanks for sharing

Butterfly... 'sigh' one of the most colorful and the most beautiful creature God ever created. Is a very colorful poem, so vivid, another jewel from your writings. Well done

This poem is filled with beautiful, colorful images, giving the message to the reader that our souls roam freely in search of the 'significant other' who can add color (life) to our world. Well done! Beth