Sunday, January 6, 2008

Butterfly Comments

Rating: 5.0

Went down to the garden
and see a Caterppilar
Crawling struggling on the earth
In reality she is a butterfly
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Mary Wismer
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Raj Nandy 16 June 2008

A beauty of a poem, the last para sums it up very well! - Raj Nandy

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Duncan Wyllie 13 January 2008

The butterflies beauty never dies, a wonderful poem on faith and strength, beauty Love duncan X

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CU2urDream Lost 11 January 2008

A beautiful illustration of our own life...you know why you are different..cause your faith always comes first..and follow whats your heart wanted to shared. very well penned Mary.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 08 January 2008

as change thy name is nature, so nothing to be confused by the change, thanks for sharing

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CU2urDream Lost 07 January 2008

beautiful write polyhymnia.....you are talking about us..about human.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 06 January 2008

Im homeless As wonderer as dandelion Lead me, butterfly! Over the rainbow gate Where my lover lives Among roses Waiting for me

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Thad Wilk 06 January 2008

Ahhh i love butterflies Mary! Now i love them more! Thank you beautiful write! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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