Butterfly Comments

Amazing poem and what a beautiful narrative! Man asking a butterfly questions about how to overcome human crises through transformation in life. Greatly enjoyed reading it. Thanks.

Quaint look at the butterfly nice to read the theme also if you become one you will be able to smell your lover a mile away...loved it...regards

sir. A beautiful Poem for Children.. I best love your last alliteration.. :)

A good poem, apt for children and definitely love this poem of yours about butterfly, well versed.

Wow! I love this ....Why do you have two lives? Can I get one, please! I want to transform mine, To overcome human crisis, Through the mysterious morphosis....i am fascinated by butterflies 2, i wrote something called the transformation...check it out. You just became 1 of my favourite poet though

Very simple and very nice indeed!

Very nice....and simple the desire to be set free is quite evident here...Oh! butter fly, frm flower to flower to flatter by...great use of alliteration... Splendid...keep it up

Quite nice! I'm glad you're one of the firsts to visit my url and read my poems..

How lovely and witty in the way you deal with the subject, Abdul...Well done

This is so different from your other poems! ! ! but still exploits the human emotions like magic! ! !

... To overcome human crisis. Everyone wants a fresh start at a better life. Kinda wish we had more than one life, too - to morph like the butterfly, and fly above life's troubles. Neat. 10

This is about beautiful nature tropic poem.........

I feel the aroma of your romanticism like one Blake and one Shelley. I love the meter and rhyme in this poem. These lines are flashing like lights in mind, heigh-ho! Derry o! I want to be you, O! Butterfly, From flower to flower to flatter by.' An awesome poem by a handy writer Wahab! Wha Taj! Great and nicely done.10++++ few smiles.. catch it. ha ha ha :) :) :) :)

Very nice..would be interesting to have two lives and of course fly!

Good use of words. They kind of rub off each other and dance.

I also want to be butterfly........................ nice poem......................

Butterflies are wonderful creatures. I love them and your poem about them is very nice. Well done

A lovely write for an exquisite creature.

..beautiful thinking poem.. ..it speaks more than words..

When I started to read this poem I thought it to be lighthearted but discovered that there was an impotant question within its thought provoking fine descriptions.Thank you for making me think!