Thursday, September 10, 2015

Butterfly © Comments

Rating: 4.5

A butterfly upon the breeze,
floated to the wind-blown trees;
How it hoped to even dare,
to drift so high upon the air!
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Roann Mendriq
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Ryson Dsouza 01 November 2016

wonderfully written Roann... it deserves a 10+++

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Dan Reynolds 11 February 2016

Very much goes with a flow, ideal for recitation. Well done.

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Loke Kok Yee 08 October 2015

A most delightful read, thank you for sharing-10

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Della Perry 13 September 2015

lovely and rhythmic. Enjoyed the read x

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Valerie Dohren 10 September 2015

There's so much rubbish posted on this site that it's nice to read something good for change - well done, like it!

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