The wings of the butterflies in beautiful color
Children likes them so much as well as the grown ups
Their flying, their companions, their selection of flowers
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Sir, I wish you would write in your native language. The English is quite stilted and difficult to read. There is a beauty about butterflies, I admit, but I don't see it in your poem. The butterfuly, the cabbage white, His honest idiocy of flight, Will never now, it is too late, Master the art of flying straight, Yet who knows so well as I, He has a just sense of how not to fly. Even the acrobatic swift Has not his flying-crooked gift. Robert Graves
The joy in playing with those short lived butterflies is inexplicable. The ultimate pleasure drawn in catching them and playing with them is recalled. Beautiful read Sir!
Butterflies short lived beauty of creation.A nice work.
a beautiful poem symbolized by a beautiful butterfly- i like it
such a pleasure to see them as well reading this... thanks a lot..
I like butterflies they are lovely just like your poem sir...
Hi Gangadharan Nair, Tagore has written, Butterflies have not years but days to live, Still still have time enough! Your lovely poem reminded me of the small poem by Tagore. Thank you.
Yes its true, watching butterflies makes the heart cool and forget the sorrows.
And their special attractions have brought death to many of them at the hands if collectors! That is why I try not to show myself off, lest I be euthanized and pinned in a museum case! All kidding aside, I enjoyed poem though I think butterflies all have ability to live for many days, even months in some cases. Bri ☺
The nature's talent of creation is so precious no one can question its total perfection-well written
dawn and dusk. how lovely are the butterflies. we forget all our worries. nice ideas dear poet. thank you for allowing me to read your poems
And for nature and its beauty we should glorify the Creator God, the unseen Master! Well done, Gangadharan!
Alas! its longevity is so small and limited The death is imminent a full day Still it performs in its glory and pride.- - - -Loved the lines for its intrinsic meaning.A beautiful poem.
The shortness of our life span should not define us.Rather the beauty of our nature and quality of our work should define our life.A beautiful and expressive poem.
Butterflies are the wonders of world and nature Just like the rainbows in the open sky we see. A beautiful poem.......................10
A truly enjoyed write on the butterfly. I feel the beauty of your write A life that is short but well lived. Nicely done.
butterflies are beautiful creatures of God's kingdom nice writing
the similarity drawn with that of a rainbow was very nice and enjoyed
they truly bring great joys to the beholders, lovely write.
A lovely reminder of the beauty of nature Gangadharan and beauty translates in any language.Lodigiana xx