Saturday, April 7, 2012

Butterfly Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hovering over a buttercup quizzically
Slowly landing on it and kissing it lovingly.

Her purple wings fluttered supple
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Isabella Francis
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Ben Burger 08 April 2012

She looked in my eyes again, searching my soul In a second she me and took my sisters role. I haad to read these lines a couple times over, until i got it, snd I believe this is the most critcual line that makes the entire poem start to make sense

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Sharad Juneja 08 April 2012

very beautiful............... i 'm left with no words

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