Friday, January 20, 2012

Butterfly Comments

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You are like a butterfly,
With open wings on air,
Taking flight despite it all,
Leave behind all that despair,
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Victoria Gauci
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Heather Wilson 31 May 2012

A beautiful write, A fairies heart you hold inside, lovely.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 21 January 2012

Nice poem Victoria.enjoyed reading.

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Robert Rorabeck 20 January 2012

Very nice assonance, well developed- Hope you keep writing

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Francis Tikava 20 January 2012

I like it. It's nice. Could you read my poems?

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Victoria Gauci

Victoria Gauci

Cleveland Ohio
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