Monday, March 5, 2018

Butterflies [ Tanka ] Comments

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Butterflies hover
In shady trees to shelter
Their tender bodies
From scorching heat of the sun
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Rini shibu 06 March 2018

Great nature poem Nuder..full mark,10

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Joshua Adeyemi 05 March 2018

Their tender bodies From scorching heat of the sun That burns their fragile wings I think that depicts her better. Joshua.

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 March 2018

fragile wings of the butterfly finding comfort in the shades of leaves and flowers......... fine poetic.......thank you dear poet... tony

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