Sunday, April 19, 2009

Butterflies, Flowers, Romance Comments

Rating: 3.5

Multicolored monarch fly,
Flower to flower vie,
Tipples nectar,
While I play guitar
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Noel Horlanda
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Kisses cheek to cheek, The dame and I at the peak, To pick on, pick Yellow red daisies n’ garden..... beautiful embodiment of love and romance.. free love from one place to anotehr for butterflies.. lovley and commendable write.... read mine.. anywhere.... butterflies around....home bound

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Obinna Eruchie 18 May 2009

you are good with the rhyming in this one, and i like the description.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 April 2009

Marvelous.

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Ency Bearis 20 April 2009

wonderful write..nice word play and well crafted poem..10

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Catrina Heart 20 April 2009

What a great piece of nature, well structured and presented in vividness...nice poetic language you put up here.....Thanks! ! !

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rago rago 19 April 2009

finely presented and beautiful to read. many a thanks for your kind sharing.

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Noel Horlanda

Noel Horlanda

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