Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
Thursday, January 29, 2009

Butterflies, Are They? Comments

Rating: 5.0

My child is fond of butterflies
And dances with those little flies
Whitty, Spotty, tiny flies
And little pretty butterflies
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Sandhya S.N
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Indira Babbellapati 25 August 2009

i liked the way u started the poem...when my son was 5, he always liked to to call them 'flutterflies' because of their fluttering wings and pulled by its logic i too call them so ever since...enjoyed ur long verse on flutterfly...

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Mubeen Sadhika 07 August 2009

Beautiful narration. Enjoyed reading.

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Ted M 21 July 2009

The lovely flowers, with their beautiful colours, proudly stand, attracting the (butterflies) bees providing them the nice nectar and help to pollinate. Nature well explained, very detailed. Lovely observation and nicely composed.

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Don’t u see those lovely flowers? White and red and blue in colours Dancing with the butterflies As if they had reached their spirit... see the lovely sprit of nature behind.. it gives pleasent scene to be enjoyed with full satisfaction......10 read mine 'mom i miss u.....mother and i wept....papa do u know and papa u too

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Kesav Easwaran 13 April 2009

the poem expresses well the idea inside...good work...10

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Vinod Kumar 08 April 2009

Nice work with good messages, thanks for sharing,10+

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premji premji 09 March 2009

lalitha dropped a wonderful comment... a man will be complete only with a woman and vice-versa. so flowers has to be very careful selecting their butterflies!

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Zachary Clark 20 February 2009

It runs nicely using both your style and other poets endings to fix it nicely and make it your own giorgues poem. (I am straight just a note)

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Lalitha iyer 20 February 2009

Dear Sandhya, the men are all treacherous, eh? But, does the flower enjoys when he sucks? Then y blame him. That is his nature. There are flowers shrewd enough too. It is by flower's good nature that she secretes and shares and by nature bee attracted by smell delicious comes and sucks. What is the use of a barren, unfertile, dry flower? if reverse is the situation, then what will the bee turned flower do?

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Joseph Poewhit 29 January 2009

Like the red cape to the bull in the arena

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Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
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