Butterflies, Are They? Comments

i liked the way u started the poem...when my son was 5, he always liked to to call them 'flutterflies' because of their fluttering wings and pulled by its logic i too call them so ever since...enjoyed ur long verse on flutterfly...

Beautiful narration. Enjoyed reading.

The lovely flowers, with their beautiful colours, proudly stand, attracting the (butterflies) bees providing them the nice nectar and help to pollinate. Nature well explained, very detailed. Lovely observation and nicely composed.

Don’t u see those lovely flowers? White and red and blue in colours Dancing with the butterflies As if they had reached their spirit... see the lovely sprit of nature behind.. it gives pleasent scene to be enjoyed with full satisfaction......10 read mine 'mom i miss u.....mother and i wept....papa do u know and papa u too

the poem expresses well the idea inside...good work...10

Nice work with good messages, thanks for sharing,10+

lalitha dropped a wonderful comment... a man will be complete only with a woman and vice-versa. so flowers has to be very careful selecting their butterflies!

It runs nicely using both your style and other poets endings to fix it nicely and make it your own giorgues poem. (I am straight just a note)

Dear Sandhya, the men are all treacherous, eh? But, does the flower enjoys when he sucks? Then y blame him. That is his nature. There are flowers shrewd enough too. It is by flower's good nature that she secretes and shares and by nature bee attracted by smell delicious comes and sucks. What is the use of a barren, unfertile, dry flower? if reverse is the situation, then what will the bee turned flower do?

Like the red cape to the bull in the arena