Butterflies. Comments

It just perfect start for poem just like Sachin and Sewag give a scintillating start, my fellow poet did the same. Thanks to sachin, thanks to Sewag, moreover thanks to the poet. 'when these creatures fly they spread colors in the sky.' A perfect ending to the poem. I like the way poem carried the thoughts on animal beings. Only a true transparent heat can see it. One can't see even if they wear telescopes. When we see these things of nature, we feel trivial but if just sink in the think then we can comprehend how the universe is made beautiful. Yikes! Again I pat the poet and give her a hat for her universal theme.

Such a beautiful poem...love the sound of your poetic voice... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

beauty my sister, beauty