Butterflies Comments

Excellent mesage sir. This makes me remember of Father Devessia, The Principal of my school. Whenever he sees childern catching butterflies or dragon flies, he would take the children to his chamber and polietly explain all that you have mentioned in this poem.

if it was your intention to make me think of Silence of the Lambs, then mission accomplished. superbly written, twist and a ride.

I like the trail of evidence that appears as you are reading this. Boys are always closer to being men than one would imagine.

a very well crafted piece of writing