Sunday, June 28, 2009

Butterflies Comments

Rating: 5.0

The words are little
Butterflies
Fluttering around my head.
I catch them
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Sallie Howson
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Susan Williams 12 September 2020

Another brilliant piece of writing. 10+++++++++

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Afzal Shauq 16 October 2009

The words are little Butterflies Fluttering around my head. I catch them Haphazardly, Admiring their beauty a good poem and yes the words are really very small to express for butterfly tyle sweet ideas as you did here..liked it and its enough heart feeling poem with good idea..10/10

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Afzal Shauq 16 October 2009

The words are little Butterflies Fluttering around my head. I catch them Haphazardly, Admiring their beauty a good poem and yes the words are really very small to express for butterfly tyle sweet ideas as you did here..liked it and its enough heart feeling poem with good idea..10/10

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Afzal Shauq 16 October 2009

The words are little Butterflies Fluttering around my head. I catch them Haphazardly, Admiring their beauty a good poem and yes the words are really very small to express for butterfly tyle sweet ideas as you did here..liked it and its enough heart feeling poem with good idea..10/10

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Susan Jarvis 28 June 2009

A truly beautiful analogy - your 'butterflies' have settled into an admirable pattern in this little gem of a poem. S :)

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