Butterflies Comments

great poem..................r u a nature lover? ? ? ? ?

Good subject matter and nice conception 10 C hris

cool i really like this but i agree with vidyadhar some line are a little too long but it is great i like the detail in this one to me really that is what it is all about detail

Keep up the good work Nick, you have a talent for writing.

good one but some lines seem to be little long loosing rhythm.......

i like this one a lot its like a wounderful summer poem that everyone can enjoy i love it im giveing it a perfected ten =)